I just read Mike's essay on Lincoln and Darwin. He gave his opinion of all the things that the two men had in common, and then all the things that they did not share. Mike said that he felt that they would still be fighting for the rights of the slaves. Wish they still lived today, maybe they would be the ones that could make the color of your skin not be your disputable asset.
Mike,
Things that I noticed on your essay.
All men are created equality should be equally.
Believes should be beliefs
Personal should be personally
Wright should be right
The essay was good, and he did have a valid point in the essay.
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